Dear Ms. Rose,
My name is Julia Ilin and I recently applied for early action admission to Yale University. Thank you so much for taking the time to consider my candidacy for Yale. As a prospective political science major fascinated by international relations, I am confident that Yale would be the perfect school for me to pursue my undergraduate studies.
Since submitting my application, I have ranked 3rd in the NYC District Qualifier for the 2022 National Debate Tournament, and will be attending Nationals this June. As founder of my organization, Debaters, I have devoted much of my time to teaching middle school students speech and debate practices. I trained nine of my high school’s Speech and Debate members in how to use the debate curriculum I developed to teach middle school students, and we welcomed sixty seventh graders to our 2nd Annual Christmas Debate this past December.
As a service-oriented, intellectually curious student, I have felt that Yale is unique among its peers, particularly for a student with the intention to study political science. I would be particularly keen to work with Professor Sarah Bush on her research concerning policing boundaries in human rights and democracy promotion. The research opportunities available for a student like me, who hopes to gain hands-on experience in the field, would allow me not only to learn from eminent professors within the field, but also to see the real-world applications of what I’m studying for myself.
Thank you again for your thoughtful and comprehensive consideration.
Best,
Julia Ilin